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Post by Daniel Fenrir on Apr 9, 2009 3:01:18 GMT -5
Logan Black..... both RPs were great, I liked the first one more, great scenario on the road. Walker should suit up, because I don't know how is he going to beat you.
CJ Tyler... I enjoy this character, he is on the edge between good and evil, his beatiful wife is his guiding light, but I missed a match against Justin Sane whenn CJ left Suffering.
Nightkrow... You are getting better, keep up the good work Scarecrow
Ronald.... lmao, you are Santino Marella of ICW. This storyline with Reid looks great.
Israel.... I give up, I can't beat you with those boots. Great idea
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Post by Justin Sane on Apr 9, 2009 11:08:43 GMT -5
Silly Fenrir...CJ didn't leave The Suffering. He was thrown out.
Logan Black: I like the character. Your roleplays are generally enjoyable. I can't really think of any suggestions to give other than to keep it up.
Nightkrow: I agree with Fenrir, you're getting better. So same advice as above. Just keep it up.
That's really all I've got for this week. Haha.
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Hunter Houston
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Post by Hunter Houston on Apr 9, 2009 17:26:07 GMT -5
Aight, I'll do feedback as well!
Fenrir: Awesome RP. I like when Daniel talks in what seems to be more of a scripted way then just rambling. It comes off more professional, like a real champ.
ThumbTack: Missed your mix of comedy & toughness. He's a very unique character and doesn't often disappoint.
Logan: Both RP's were boss. They always lack a little creativity, but the stuff you say is always very good and VERY hard to think of comebacks too. You can make anyone look stupid. I don't wanna face you, haha. Just work on getting the creative juices flowing!
Nightkrow: Much better this week, just keep taking your time, filling it out, don't rush anything and don't get discouraged when you don't win. Obviously there are people better then you here, but no worries, keep improving.
Ronald: Offensive? Yes. Vulgar? Yes. Entertaining? OH YES! I didn't pay near as much to anyone's RP as much as yours. You really know how to pull the reader in... but tone it down a notch, you're gonna make everyone hate you, haha.
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Post by Reid Anderson on Apr 9, 2009 21:49:00 GMT -5
Some of my fav quotes of this week came from Ronald Williams second rp, but I think my favorite quote from this week comes from drum roll please.... Ralph Nader's rp!
Ralph's past two rp's have been fun for me to read and I think this line I'm about to quote is my favorite ever from the character and maybe in ICW so far! "Yes patriotism. Nobody I know loves this dear country of America more than you Ralph Nader. You have the strength of Lincoln. And the strong legs of Franklin Roosevelt….Wait… I mean the intellectual mind of George Washington. You have more power than you know. All you have to do now is believe you have that power!"
I was cracking up when he said the FDR thing!
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Post by Byson on Apr 9, 2009 21:50:35 GMT -5
Haha, oh Ralph... If he sticks around through his first 100+ losses, he may get good enough and start bringing in a win or two!
;-)
You know I love you RPJ!
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Post by Byson on Apr 9, 2009 21:51:22 GMT -5
Thought my favorite part was at the end, when McCain sends him a text then he cries.
Crazy, but fuunnnny
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Post by Reid Anderson on Apr 9, 2009 21:53:57 GMT -5
It's tough in my book to make me laugh more than Ronald Williams makes me laugh but I think ralph might've beaten him this week, but I do think Ronald's overall second rp was darn funny!
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Post by Byson on Apr 9, 2009 21:57:04 GMT -5
We got three comedic cats now. Ralph, Ronald, & Dementia.
TKD is really turning more to a true face then a comedic face.
We GOTTA do a triple threat the Mayhem after LMS, think about the rp's :-D
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Post by Reid Anderson on Apr 9, 2009 22:00:24 GMT -5
I dunno I still see Ronald Winning but I would love to read all of those rp's as I really like Ralph now and I liked Dementia's first rp although I didn't read his second one!
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Post by Emma Chase on Apr 10, 2009 17:37:08 GMT -5
I'm really feeling like I have problems with writing Emma, so I'm looking for criticism of all of my Emma RPs more than feedback, if anyone wants to shoot some my way.
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Post by Daniel Fenrir on Apr 10, 2009 21:11:09 GMT -5
big props to Jack for his second RP
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Phoenix
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Post by Phoenix on Apr 10, 2009 22:12:18 GMT -5
...Wow, everyone's was really great! I loved you anyway Daniel, I can't wait to work with you in the future! I'd like people to get back to me on my roleplays, I love feedback! xx
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Post by Hu$tla on Apr 10, 2009 22:16:35 GMT -5
It's hard for me to give feedback considering that I am new around here and am just getting started. I'm not as established in this place as some others.
I will say that I really enjoyed: Fenrir's roleplay. He looks like the kind of guy I'd like to feud with in the future. Logan Black also looks like a force to be reckoned with. I also very much enjoyed Walker Sullivan and Emma's roleplays.
I will say to Ronald Williams: Dude, you gave me a run for my $$$ and I was very impressed with every roleplay you did and I enjoyed both posts, you racist fucker.
What did people think of my two/three roleplays this week?
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Post by Daniel Fenrir on Apr 11, 2009 8:01:00 GMT -5
...Wow, everyone's was really great! I loved you anyway Daniel, I can't wait to work with you in the future! I'd like people to get back to me on my roleplays, I love feedback! xx Your RP was sexy, with crowbar in front of the mirror... I loved the beginning too.
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Post by Antonio Benito on Apr 14, 2009 21:48:35 GMT -5
Ok it's my first time playing Antonio in about a month or two, and this rp was tough for me to write, but I would really appreciate some feedback on my rp, and maybe some constructive criticism
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