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Post by Lucas Fox on Mar 19, 2009 20:21:27 GMT -5
^ Aren't you handler of CJ Tyler? I though CJ and Ashley knew each other.
Logan... I like the mix of Brock Lesnar and Goldberg, It is good idea starting to refer to streak that made Goldberg famous, This match should be interesting Christy Hemme vs. Goldberg, good job putting her over in RP.
Jason.... I like your character, I hope Jason makes his momma proud.
Lovecraft....very funny RP
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Post by Byson on Mar 19, 2009 22:04:26 GMT -5
Everyone take note of ole Lucas Fox. Give Feedback to get it. That's the key.
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Post by Byson on Mar 19, 2009 22:05:46 GMT -5
Awesome RP from Lucas, he could easily become my favorite character.
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Post by Emma Chase on Mar 20, 2009 20:58:02 GMT -5
I know that the results are already up, and I came in right at the wire, but I'm still working on figuring out Emma, so I'd sort of love feedback on the RP that I posted.
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Post by kasaitoriii on Mar 21, 2009 0:00:12 GMT -5
I just read Foxworth's RP, and I'm actually laughing so hard from it I'm crying. Holy shit, it's going to be fun going against you. Please, please, please, please don't leave ICW! We need more RPs that good!
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Post by Byson on Mar 21, 2009 3:33:10 GMT -5
Just wanted to say Emma's RP may be my favorite this week. The detail of the actual character was so good. You do not rely on your words as much as your character, it's very strong, and shows great maturity as a writer. Great work
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Post by Byson on Mar 26, 2009 15:59:51 GMT -5
Some quick props for this week.
Great stuff from Daniel Fenrir & Ronald Williams. My favorite thing about you two is, a lot of people change their characters and how they normally act to fit against their opponent, Daniel & Ronald stick to what makes them "them" no matter who they face. Great match up, and the winner is only winning by a very small margin.
Jeran Hudson, really enjoyed your first RP. Very good character and it is character driven, which is what I enjoy most.
TKD, dang man, really surprised me this week. You stuck to the astranaut thing, but made it interesting & creative, and made me look forward to the match. Great work!
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Post by Lucas Fox on Mar 27, 2009 7:24:45 GMT -5
The idea of CJ Tyler was great, but it could have been better.
Great pictures in Israels promo, good idea. I liked your RP
Jeran wvery good debut promo, I am still waiting for part two and Where did you ge that first Randy Orton picture?
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Post by harry on Mar 27, 2009 11:24:33 GMT -5
Some feedback on some of the rp's for this week.
Foxworth Brown: Liked your rp this week, think he's a very intriguing character and I really like that you sold your opponent well, we've had several faces who just choose not to sell their opponent but instead run their names into the ground so it's nice to see a face doing what he's supposed to do.
Daniel Fenrir: You're stuff this week has been excellent and I honestly don't know if you're going to win or not just because you and Ronald seem so evenly matched this week.
Ronald Williams: Oh my gosh Ronald everytime I read your rp's it's amazing how fast you can cross the line I mean within two lines of dialouge you probably pissed off someone in the fed. Like I said I don't know who is going to win this week, but I bet this match gets MOTN
Ralph Nader: .... Ummmmmm...... yeah
TKD: Wow it's amazing how far you've come with this character after reading that rp that was in the spotlight this week. I wonder if TKD will win this week or not.
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Post by Madison Manson on Mar 27, 2009 16:09:00 GMT -5
I have a lot on my mind this week and struggled through writing. If you get around to checking out "Folsom Prison Blues," I'd love to know what you think of it. I'm sort of thinking more like, comments and constructive criticism if anyone has anything to offer, I'm trying to improve at writing promos and whatnot.
I also wanted to add that I thought that some of the images in Israel's RP really made it. That last monster, the linework one, is heartbreakingly adorable. I sort of wanted to give it a hug.
Oh, and Foxworth's RP really was pretty hilarious. Justin was sitting there dying when he read it, so I had some pretty high expectations and wasn't disappointed.
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Post by Reid Anderson on Apr 1, 2009 11:18:36 GMT -5
Just want to throw out some props to TKD as I've now enjoyed his past few rp's. I'm really looking forward to the future of TKD and would like to see him get another X-Treme Title reign soon!
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Post by Byson on Apr 1, 2009 12:48:07 GMT -5
I love his BANNER! It's awesome. Really enjoyed both Logan's & Jeran's RP's. Those two are gonna have a great match, match of the night, no doubt.
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Post by Reid Anderson on Apr 3, 2009 18:09:59 GMT -5
Well here's some feedback for some of our newer members. I'm going to try and give constructive criticism, cause as Madison pointed out we don't seem to tell people how they can do better but just what they do well.
Phoenix: Ok this would be your first RP i've ever read, but it was good. The only problem I had with it was that you sort of no sold Bella's character which I'm not a big fan of. I know it's hard to sell people when you're a cocky heel, but I'd like to see more of our cocky heels trying to say that their opponent is good but they're just better, which I never really felt you did in your rp.
Hu$tla: So this was a decent first rp it was interesting to get to know the character a little, I just wish maybe it hadn't been so long. As i said to Phoenix it doesn't seem like you really sold Dementia. Also just as a side note the show is Mayhem not Carnage.
Ralph Nader: Now I have to say best RP from you ever! Although last week's wasn't hard to beat. I liked that you sold Ronald a lot, but there is a point where you sell an opponent to much. Like I don't mind when you sell your opponent and say that you're equals but you basically said that you had no chance until the last line or two. I know the character is a little ridiculous but I loved the use of the political figures this week.
Nightkrow: I wish this RP had been longer, but you said you we're sick so I'll give you a break on it. You did sell your opponent about the right amount for me I just wished you had talked longer about each topic as I said earlier. Anyway I don't have much for you this week, but hopefully I can give you some better feedback next time.
Dementia: Where to start Dementia... Ok so I enjoyed the rp, and I like the character. I know some people might not like that you jumble the words all together with him, but I find it intriguing and different which is good. I wish you would've talked about Hu$tla more, BUT I understand as by the time you wrote I don't think he had a bio or anything up for you to work with. Anyway I enjoy the character and look forward to more of your stuff.
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Post by thumbtack on Apr 6, 2009 19:58:04 GMT -5
feed-my-fucking-back!!!!!!!
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Post by CJ Tyler on Apr 8, 2009 0:05:22 GMT -5
LOl Oh actually guys CJ and Ashley do know each other, but I only play CJ; Ashley plays as CJ's girlfriend in ICW and in reality she's my wife. Just thought I'd clear up the ^ Aren't you handler of CJ Tyler? I though CJ and Ashley knew each other. comment lol
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