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Post by Walker Sullivan on Feb 13, 2009 16:32:45 GMT -5
Yeah no hard feelings I understand what your saying. Sorry If I pissed anyone off.
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Post by Ronald"The Lovecraft"Williams on Feb 22, 2009 21:37:44 GMT -5
The camera starts with Ronald walking around in confusion watching everyone talk to each other like nothing has ever happened between them.
Ronald: Hey! What the hell you guys? I thought this was supposed to be a wrestling federation. and what the fuck is an "RP"? You guys not letting me in on something? And why did Mr.Big Shot McBallStein over here say that I need to make my so called "RP's" longer? I can assure you, Ronald's Penis can't get much longer!
Ronald takes off his red satin neckerchief and throws it on the ground in disgust.
Ronald: You guys are mad pissin' me off just about now. Acting like this ain't the real deal and shit
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Post by Daniel Fenrir on Feb 22, 2009 23:09:20 GMT -5
I though this is the promo disccussion, not the backstage area. I just realized Bret Rhodes is commentator and he is in main event his salary must be huge. and he teams with face, he should be pushing for heels, since Wild is pushing for faces imo and Wild should say UN BE LIEVABLE like Vince used to
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Post by Byson on Feb 22, 2009 23:10:45 GMT -5
He's just being goofy.
It's for the storyline, big man! One time thing.
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Post by Daniel Fenrir on Feb 22, 2009 23:23:49 GMT -5
ok,I was afraid that i screwed my second RP
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Post by Daniel Fenrir on Feb 23, 2009 0:30:00 GMT -5
One correction Mr. CJ, Fenrir was giant wolf in Norse Mythology, Loki's son, but the fact you pointed norse mythology shocked me
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Post by Byson on Feb 23, 2009 1:06:47 GMT -5
Wow, I am learning so much, haha. GREAT rp's so far this week, the CJ Tyler, Daniel, Kira match is gonna be a bitch to judge
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Post by Justin Sane on Feb 23, 2009 20:11:11 GMT -5
Can I get some feedback for my roleplays, please?
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Post by Byson on Feb 23, 2009 20:17:32 GMT -5
Haha, just on my way to give it!
Justin Sane: Great work, very in character, very crazed, the stuff he says is sometimes ridiculous, but he truly believes it. I like that the most, that he really believes everything he says. My advice would be too add a little extra besides just talking about your opponent. Help us to know Sane's life, Sane's fault, Sane's history. Touch on that a little, put out more offense, right now you're just attacking on everything thrown at you, which is defense.
Daniel Fenrir: Some of the best stuff this week. You got it down on almost all points. My only advice would be do a little more. Just standing or sitting & talking is good, but it can sometimes get dull, if it's just huge paragraphs broken up between short sentences of action. Your 2nd was better in this way.
CJ Tyler: Same advice as above. It was all good stuff you said, but do more, not just cock your neck, or look somewhere, be active, make your actions, surrounding, and words all exciting.
Antonio: Good. Good character development, but not much talking of the match. Work on writing more about the match.
Chase McDaniels: Ok RP. Since this is a set match I didn't expect much from it, so It was ok that it wasn't that good, haha. I did love the part with the kids looking at you & you not caring. Very heel
I have yet to read the other RP's fully yet. Will come back when I have. Awesome work though from everyone!
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Post by thumbtack on Feb 26, 2009 21:26:42 GMT -5
feedback for this weeks RPs?
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Post by bobbyboyd on Feb 27, 2009 14:07:57 GMT -5
glad to see you use the same girl Kristy. that was cool. but bangbros? dude, haha, that place is nasty.
I like your rp's a lot. your character is awesome, comedic, serious, and just a bag of sleeve. good work imo
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Post by Ronald"The Lovecraft"Williams on Feb 27, 2009 17:50:16 GMT -5
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Post by Byson on Feb 27, 2009 17:51:42 GMT -5
Hahahahaha, I just got it.
Awesome.
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Post by Erik Stillings on Feb 27, 2009 18:40:24 GMT -5
Hahahahahahahaha.
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Post by Byson on Feb 27, 2009 18:42:24 GMT -5
Someone give the man some feedback, haha
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